Today I want to introduce myself. My name is Quimmy. I am the trans student this year. My hobbits are playing the volleyball and art designed. I have an amiable disposition and I am concerned with people. I know the importance of listening to the opinions of people and like to help them. Besides, I like sport and enjoy the time I practiced. I have tended to the volleyball team of department of English Language for a month.
I am very glad to enter the Providence University. In this campus, I know I should do my utmost for everything including my studies and volleyball team, even the part-time work. My dream is to be a philologist. I want to research on the psycholinguistics. In order to be a philologist, I should improve on my abilities of specialties and be strict with myself. (142 words.)
Hi Quimmy,
回覆刪除Firstly, I would like to say "Welcome to Providence".
Your self-introduction is short and interesting and was in order and sequence, but there is few grammatical and sentence error.
In your first sentence you should change it to transfer student and not tran. My hobbies are playing volleyball and art designing.
There is this line which I do not understand." have an amiable disposition and I am concerned with people. I know the importance of listening to the opinions of people and like to help them". Can you kindly be more specific.
Anyways, on the whole,your writing was good. Keep up the good work.
~Deborah~